Reviews for Death of a tradition

no.peace.los.angeles 2006-12-12 ch 1,	abuseOh, wow, I love this poem a lot. The little details like a Zippo, and then the second line alone is just gorgeous - "smoke shimmies in the air." It's very sexual, but not at the same time. I love this. Favorite. Keep writing! :)
Summer's Almost Gone 2006-12-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseSorry, I'm too lazy to log in. Anyway, I love this poem. It's going on my favorites for sure! It creates such a scene, with such few words. Brilliant. Peace and Love ~> Summer's Almost Gone