Oh, wow, I love this poem a lot. The little details like a Zippo, and then the second line alone is just gorgeous - "smoke shimmies in the air." It's very sexual, but not at the same time. I love this. Favorite. Keep writing! :)

Sorry, I'm too lazy to log in. Anyway, I love this poem. It's going on my favorites for sure! It creates such a scene, with such few words. Brilliant.

Peace and Love

~> Summer's Almost Gone