Awesome essay.

~Twilight Starr~

I liked the way you ended it especially. good job!

While I certainly agree that the U.S. gets too much of a bad rap (I doubt that I would prefer to live anywhere else), this essay doesn't do the country justice. It's riddled with minor errors, both grammatical and factual.

"Two pilots were sent to the New York City area but since they thought it was a Russian missile, they were out over the Atlantic." Very unclear. Remember, when writing you can't just put vagaries like 'they' and 'it' into the sentence without any background. This looks like the pilots thought that NYC was a missile.

"The day will be infamous in America." Don't make predictions about things that are already true. Makes you look slow and uninformed.

"In my opinion they have no right to be saying those things when thousands of people died on September eleventh two-thousand and one." Decrying a person's right to say these things seems pretty un-American to many. Rather, say that it was ill-mannered or in poor taste.

"Has America ever been a terrorist?" Read a history book.

There are others: I suggest that you proofread.

Despite fallacies, not a terrible essay. Spend more time thinking before typing next time and you'll probably do better.

"America has not forced anyone outside our country to adopt our way of life, to eat our food, and to wear our clothing."

Really?

See, America-bashing is stupid, because the US really is an amazing country to live in. But that's not really a true statement there.

The "God Hates America" were more than likely minions of Fred Phelps, who is a well-known ** extraordinaire.

Also, in the second paragraph, you have that 9/11 happened on September 9, 2001. It was the 11th, not the 9th.