some of these lines just completely pull
me out of my body. but some of it feels
like it's stitched together where there
can't be real seams. i'd love some
surrounding scenery that is equally
vivid too vivid approaching surreal
to feel these characters inflate to
at least one more dimension. wo. a
perfect purgative for so much of the
dry rot infecting fp. go go go.

Wow, actually when I first started reading it, I was crossing my fingers that this narrative would be a shoujo ai. I had kinda gotten the impression from the description of Senika's S-shaped body (which is exactly how I describe my own body-type)but I wasn't quite certain until you confirmed it. It just suits the characters so well. I love how it was written and the way you described Amira. She sounds like someone I would fall in love with myself.

P.S. I agree completely with you that shoujo ai impossible to find, especially decent shoujo ai. I wish there were more out there like this.

Beautiful.

I think I'm going to favorite this one.

Sorry you're formatting was ruined. =(

I'm straight, but you made me fall in love with Amira just by describing her. Touché.