 Cesalie Chase 2006-12-09 . chapter 1I like this idea - really creative! It's this kind of poetry that motivates me to experiment... All the thoughtful details you put into this poem - especially when you speak of the Christmas light possibly wishing to be something else - is really interesting; it really says something about human nature, eh?
You're right, the rhythm is slightly choppy, but the rhyming is excellent. Very light and fun, yet wonderfully profound. Keep up the awesome work, and keep spreading the joy!
--Jen
p.s. Happy Christmas to you, too :) |