Very nice. I liked the comparisons-like light against dark. A lie is the darkness and the truth is the light. :)

I like using Bible symbolism. It makes the poem so much deeper. This was a very good, simple exploration of the verse and, if you could, you could maybe explore the concept of Lie and Truth-two siblings standing on the edge of a VERY thin line...hm. There's another idea for a poem you could use!

:) - AABAT

Don't mean to be funny here but, that's oh so true!

I liked how you added the verse at the end as well. Like citing your source material, it reminds me of a hymn book.

Anyway a really good write! I especially liked the opening, good job!

Hey I liked this! My friend here in school did also.

Be blessed,

xRachx

Truth well spoken. Loved the verse. Great job. Write on and God Bless ya.