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| MistyRose14 2008-07-03 ch 1,  | abusewow. this is something different. the flow is flawless, the action perfectly described - the two things that make me want to read action stories more often. c'est vraiment chouette! i hope that you will continue with this, if you have time. also, i would like to add this to another one of my c2's. continue, s.v.p.! |
| Maiya 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseHi there! It's been awhile since I've been here at fictionpress. For some reason, I've experienced difficulty in getting into the site for the past few days. But at least I'm back now, and I'm back to writing AH! No Jikembo again. It might take awhile though, so please bear with me. Anyways, as always Puppet Frenzy has always been my favorite story with you as the author. I see you've revised it, and in my opinion the revised version is better. It allows the reader to get right into the plot and action. I hope to see more of this soon! |
| Dice Darwin 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abuseI was looking at your list of stories and this one caught my eye. Anyway, this is really cool. I liked it a lot. The action is nice, the description doesn't disrupt the flow of the story, and the plot seems interesting so far. Now I'm wondering what these puppets are. Keera seems like a great little killing machine so far. I hope you haven't given up on this story, because it seems to be pretty good. |
| Sir Exal 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseBleh. Now you have to regain all your old fans. Good luck with that. Keep going; remember that I only became a fan a dozen chapters in or so. |