WRITE MORE ITS AMAZING

great chapter...I like it...cant wait to see what happens next...hope you update soon

Hey girl! I like the edits. They totally work for me. Keep it up!

*cries* Oh, dear. This man is way too perfect. I want him for myself. We better get to him having some faults before readers decide they want to be the female lead (if they haven't already).

It was so adorably cute!

Have a wonderful day.

~Twilight Starr~

I'm not really sure how long you've had this chapter up, sorry I didn't quickly review it, I haven't been on fictionpress in a while LOL Anyways, yeah that was pretty much the best birthday anyone could ever have :D

So he wasn't the jealous boyfriend.

Good chapter. :)

Looking forward to an update.

~Twilight Starr~

Uh-oh. Jealous boyfriend.

Good chapter even though I kind of already guessed that was going to happen.

~Twilight Starr~

Aww, such a cute chapter. :)

I like all the fluff.

~Twilight Starr~

Cute chapter. :)

~Twilight Starr~

Aww, how cute. He fought for them. :)

Good chapter.

~Twilight Starr~

Cute chapter.

I like it. :)

~Twilight Starr~

Nice chapter.

~Twilight Starr~

Good chapter. :)

~Twilight Starr~

Cute chapter.

I like how she does a happy dance. :) It makes me smile.

~Twilight Starr~

I love the chapter title.

Good chapter.

~Twilight Starr~