this is a great read. creative.

This is such a great story I just can't wait until the next part comes out. It's a really great story. Keep up the good work. ^_^

That was so good i abouslutly loved it.

hmm. i really like this story. it's cool1

interesting. when is part two coming out? lol. i like the elmental theme you are using and how you manage to make the people of each element look like or have the feel of the element. it is an amazing consept. i cant wait to read more.

~Nickel