M, I love it. Romanticide. Has a nice ring to it.

i love the way the last and first lines echo in the rhyme, it works really nicely. iz x

Ooh, the classic romance and tragedy combined poem. Nice. I felt like this was a modern day fairy tale. Beautiful. Keep writing! :)

Romanticide. How creative. This whole poem was beautiful. You have great imagery, but not only that you actually put FEELING into it.

This is short, yet the images you create are complex and intense.
& "Romanticide" : what a beautiful word.

Love this. Short, but amazing. Hope to read more soon. And, kinda random, but isn't today your birthday? If it is, then happy birthday, and if I'm completely wrong, just ignore the randomness.