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| October.Leaves 2008-05-29 ch 1,  | abuseUsually I don't like poetry but lately... this site is full of amazing poems that I'm slowly falling for. Personally, I've asked the same questions to myself when this girl I was crazy about jumped in and out of my life- very well done. You have a new reader :) |
| three.word.lies 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abusei'm crazy about this. bravo to you. |
| speakhandsforme 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseah, so good. keep writing, please. |
| simpleplan13 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abusei really like the questions... awesome piece... |
| Lightning Storm 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem, I'm going through something like this right now, and it sucks ass |
| dresdendevotchka 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseGod, do I know what this feels like. Beautifully written, like all of your other work. :] |
| a lonely september 2006-12-18 ch 1, | abusegod. this is sort of sad. this wonder, these thoughts. its prettily written, nice. |
| Imalefty 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abusei like your use of punctuation... and your use of non-capitalization. (if that's a word. XD) i thought that it made the poem seem a bit younger, as though it were written by a teen (which i am, so i relate) instead of an adult. this relationship sounds complicated... as are many. anyway, you captured the mood perfectly. great job. -Lefty |
| darknessblooms 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseOh questions...there's never any answers to be found in love I think. I can really sense the swirl of emotions and turmoil in this. One thing was...the line "will it be my lot in life" seemed a little out of place because of the use of the word "lot". The language doesn't really match the rest of the poem. Otherwise, well done. |