I find I quite like your style of writing and this was no disappointment. I was only rather... off-balance? Yeah, that works --off balance when I finished reading this.

Shaping your character Insanity felt solid in how you used almost nothing but suggestives to imply what or who she is --all emotionally. That's a brilliant bit of writing there. But you also introduced her feeling like someone with a purpose and that purpose wasn't clarified --a rather large loose end to leave at the end of the story.

While I can sort of understand it's not relevant, it did kind of become imperative to the point of the story. Finding what she wanted may have been the plot... but then that beggars the question --what was it she wanted?

I still love the closing scene from her victim's perspective but I just thought I'd explain my perspective and suggest that letting loose some hint at what he did (by her, I assume, instruction) would tie the story end together a bit tighter.

Thanks for sharing!