|Reviews for A City On A HillPart One:People of Fire and Blood|
| moongazer7 8/1/08 . chapter 2
It was only half convincing. Mike was too familiar with the cellphone too quickly.
| emobreeder 12/31/06 . chapter 2
Awesome, but just one question, where's Farr?
| A.G. Moreau 12/31/06 . chapter 2
i readd your story, and it's areally intriguing idea. your style is a little odd to me though. i think you're trying to be understated in your descriptions, but it comes off as more blank and empty. i don'r teally know how to express it better than that, sorry.
| BleakHarvest 12/28/06 . chapter 2
Very, very impressed. Coupla words I'd change, but otherwise it's fantastic. Keep 'em comin.
| Narjau 12/24/06 . chapter 1
short beginning, and Michael looks a lot like Harry Potter.
try to stay away from cliche images and add more detail to the narration!
oh, and why dont you go ahead and read chapter 2,3,4 and 5 of my novel Automutilation? I promise it gets more intense as you read.
drop a review or two, would ya? :)
| Ridingtherails 12/24/06 . chapter 1
good start. i'm looking forward to reading the rest
| BleakHarvest 12/10/06 . chapter 1
Cool stuff, can't wait for more to come.