 ALK214 2004-04-05 . chapter 1Well, this poem is untypical, at the least. I love poems about nature, and this one was OK; you tend to repeate a lot of words unnecessarily, and you threw in a few awkward rhymes... It just didn't work the way I think you wanted it to. Keep writing! |
 The Neko Chica 2003-10-12 . chapter 1schnifty! |
 Edana 2003-08-27 . chapter 1Pretty layout. I like all the stars ^_^
I think that the form your poem took works really well with the actual reading and the words that you used. The imagery was beautiful, and the references to eagle symbolism. I also like how you described the eagle as being a creature of opposites: fierce but gentle etc
I liked it a lot. You write poetry very well! |
 RonethDragon Tiamat 2003-02-03 . chapter 1love it! love the design and the poem, really like description, i'm bad at reviewing poems, good! |
 Human Nature 2002-09-07 . chapter 1Lovely presentation.
Love the poem.
What can I say else? |
 ola1 2002-05-05 . chapter 1grr...my poetry isn't even have as good...i think this totally explains eagle...ferocious yet gentle.... |
 SilverCry 2002-01-26 . chapter 1 ooo i like. I have no idea why no one reveiwed this before!! how int he world did u get the words to go all wavy? love the poem! |