wow, this had a lot of emotion in it, i could feel it, and very nice on the rhymes my dear, they are very good, and love the comparison.*adds to favs*

The last line is nice. "For without emotions, man is a sham" It's a true story and it just has a nice ring to it. Just dandy, Shane.

And ... since you pretty much know my feelings on this already (or do you?) I'll make this short. It's good and I like it and I think that the one word lines are nice because they add extra emphasis where it's needed. High five!

Love,

Felicia.

AMAZING. POWERFUL. I WORSHIP YOU.

No, really. This is going on my C2 community.

To tell you the truth, at the beginning I was wondering where you were going with the whole "emotions" spin. And I was wondering where the good part of feeling would come in. Then, wonderfully, I discovered the spiritual progression of your poem near the end. The way you leave the reader hanging is creative, I think, because it mirrors the surprise the speaker himself/herself would suddenly stumble upon this truth. It's good. Keep up the good work!