|Reviews for Cappuccino|
| squiggle-line 12/8/06 . chapter 1
The last line seems kind of out of place because there's no previous mention of doing anything wrong.
I have to confess that I'm not much of a poetry reader but some statements in this piece seem sort of rushed ("I dont know and don't care")...
| M. Williams 12/8/06 . chapter 1
It's simple, but thats probably it's greatest strength. I really like it. Good job. :)
| Unwritten Answers 12/8/06 . chapter 1
haha it came as a bit of surprise to me that this is a poem, but i like it. very nice.