i'm absolutely speechless. this has to be the best story i've read since i've signed up about a week ago. My review just may be inadequate to explain just how genius this was. if i see your published work in a bookstore, i might just be the first to pick it up.

It was a great narrative, was it a dream? I wonder if the guy really exists. Were you a vampire, or a mortal in the midst? Please email me, I have so much more I want to talk to you about.I can tell that you are magickal as well.For some reason I am kinda excited.Are you on the left, or right hand path?Please Email me.Okay?

Wow, I felt the drama. Just, wow. This is much more unique than the rest of the stories I have read today (and I've read a lot). Brilliant, captivating, and mysterious (even when those people were revealed for what they were in the end).

Ah! That was cool! I liked it. :) You took away all the mystery though. :( Mystery is good...