whoa, i liked this. nice job!

Good Job!! Thanks for the review!
--ShookieDoesntKnow

Awesome. Wierd, but--it's like my metafiction.

I liked this very much- the adjective usage was great, as was the concept and how it was executed. The only thing I'd change is maybe the wording of the last line... it just seems a little bit too sudden an end, especially since this poem is fairly short. But otherwise... splendid.

Your analogy of chapters to life, is quite intriguing.

EB