Very good. Is there more or is this it?♥Kiwi

Some parts were kind of hard to understand with the wording you used, and it didn't seem like your usual quality. =\

Hahaha. It's so funny that Bailey thinks he has a chance with Honorine. He should make a move or.. speak or something. And speaking of Honorine, we should hear more from her. Don't know much about the chick yet.
And part of me wanted the twins to win so Bailey had to smack their moms ass... that would have been the funniest thing ever.
But I'm glad cause now they can still make out with each other under the guise of a bet. Which, yeah right. They know they like it a bit too much.
Cheers!

"My god, maybe Honorine is just stupid! That’s it! She’s an idiot!" (I second that.)

XD And why can't I be Honorine? A kiss in front of her a day? That lucky, lucky girl... :P

Haha... Cute end to the chapter. :)

xo

Bwahaha, I shudder to think what shall happen next.

Heyo~! My goodness, i love this story so far *lol* I think that it's funny yet adorable at the same time. Even though the incidents with Keiron did scare me a little. but it all makes out for a great story!! I really can't wait to see what you are going to do with it. Please update as soon as you can~

yay an update!

Hehe, this is an interesting story. I can't decide whether or not I like Bailey, but I definitely like Airyn and Keiron. =) They are amusing with their awkwardness, and innuendos are always fun.

~Moose

i was totally rooting for the two of them to lose. and if it's two to one...they suck! ><

sorry, i have nothing wittier than that.

Yay for updates! Haha, now they have to kiss in front of Honorine. The blatant innuendo was fun!

It was interesting. I liked it alot. Update soon

Very entertaining and funny story. Keep going!

This story is filled with awkwardness. I love it. When the boys were kissing, I had a feeling that their mom was going to walk in. XD I'm so good. :P

Haha the masturbation thing. ^_^


Old lady tentacle rape... Interesting. Unpleasant, unwelcomed thoughts come with it, but it's definitely interesting.

I had something to say before I went to dinner... But now it's three hours later and I can't remember... OH! Mirrors confuse me. The whole time he was talking about being his brother's reflection I was just "duh...huh?" I'm simple-minded. But if I concentrate, I can understand. And I like it. XD

xo

I was all worried when their mother saw them kissing, I was like "Wow, is there already a huge conflict in the story?" but then I sighed and was like "Wow their skins were saved..."

Anyways I'm really excited for more! I know it probably won't affect the time in which you do, but still I'm going to say "Update soon!"

I completely just thought of old lady tentacle rape.

awesome squared and double-dosed on valium. anyways, excellent chapter and the whole 'mother catching them frenching' was the cherry on the garbage can. because cherries belong there...*nevermind*

excellent update.

and fictionpress is acting strange to me! it hates for me to try to log in. funky bastards.