great chapter. sry bout not review that last 2 chapters. ive been busy n i kinda sorta 4got bout the story. well. great chapter. update soon.

seems good so far! it was really short, but still good. can't wait for the next chapter...write more soon!

-Sa x33

omgzz, that grape incident wuz hilarious!

and ur story iz just awesomely awesome

Of course the girl's team had to win! D

Haha I've played Truth or Dare but not just Truth. It's scary . ahahha. I wonder who was carrying a pencil around with them? LOL

that was a fun chapter. the grape incident sounds really funny. hey i was just wondering...i knoe you may be busy but if you can...can you read my story? it may not be the best thing ever but...

I did not forget the main characters, I just forgot who some of the minor characters are. And even if it was a 'bridge' chapter, it was still amusing, I really loved that grape thing... I swear, fruit are evil. When I was little, I was TERRIFIED of tomatoes just because I mistook the word 'tornado' for it. Yeah, I wasn't the brightest crayon in the box back then. Anywho, I still enjoyed the chapter, and I can't wait to read more.

Ashley

LOL, this is so funny! UPDATE! They are finally non fighting for one chapter!

ahh! ur story roxs! must continue to write fast n more kayys!

great story..hmm but Nathan seems quite bad nw..hahas!

O ... Nathan's tall, dark and handsome? Just the guy I go for. But that's not saying much seeing as my present boyf is blonde, still tall but more adorable. lol.

great story! update soon!

hey...lol! this is a great story!It isn't a cliche! SO, that's really really good...

Nathan sounds HOT! Which he is lol!Cleo sounds pretty and they all sound like the surfie types to me! Keep going...Keep updating...

lol. that would have been a very embarrassing question. I think nathan should have teased her more.

o i forgot to say that the slam dunk you spunk bit was brilliant..very funny...please update soonn!

no! no!...etc no's...! why only eight? I like your story as you can tell...very amusing and laugh out loudable..haha...i can't wait to see what you come up with next..and when i say i can't wait i really can't im a curious/impatient person by nature and ill probably follow your entire story through just to see what happens...lol...keep up the good writing..

haha

this story made me laugh so much

;)

I think you can do better in potraying the characters, like their personalities and whatnot, be more in-depth

oh

and I love the old lady

"I'D SLAM DUNK YOU ANYTIME YOU SPUNK!"

I read wrong and thought she said punk

xD