|Reviews for Revenge, Best Served Hot ::Formerly Take Me Away::|
| PandaPanda 8/8/08 . chapter 12
What a lovely and witty story! :)
I can't wait to read more.
| SapphireEyes16 8/1/08 . chapter 12
the gutter of all the things a gutter, tht was was hilarious so update soon!
| CelticLady 7/11/08 . chapter 12
Hey I love this story, actually I love both of your stories! Please finish!Please!
| jekodama 6/21/08 . chapter 12
Well, not only you leave us at a friggin' CLIFFHANGER, you go MIA for like, FOREVER! I seriously don't like you!
And a BLOODY FILLER CHAPTER! Makes you all the more dislikable! I swear if it weren't for the fact that you mentioned Pluto, I would not read anymore! And because Nathan is hot, but that's not the point. Update soon, or face the wrath of Kratos! Err, I mean, the wrath of the Mighty Kodama!
Now, seriously, a piece of advice: Don't leave your stories abandoned for so long, because it makes readers bored and they forget why they liked the story in the first place. I really hope you update soon! :D
| emilybh 6/19/08 . chapter 12
haha i love it!
| sunflower.kiss 6/19/08 . chapter 12
Hahha, I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Mellifluence 6/10/08 . chapter 12
Lol, same Radi humour as always. ...I really don't know where you manage to pull this stuff from. Actually, I don't think I WANT to know either...
The style of the writing though has definitely changed. Must be the Health Sci gettin' to ya, coz there's no other explanation for the vocab jump. Well, there is also FreeRice, of course - which, by the way, I'm as addicted to as GJ Creme Brulees. ..Anyways, not necessarily a bad thing, just kinda inconsistent with the original tone you started off with. Guess the story is growing old- *ahem* MATURE along with you.
Keep up the fab work! - it's like Spongebob for my little bro, the daily dose of healthy brainless entertainment. _ Moreover, I can't believe you've managed to find the time to write with the horror that is exams in house. That's double (cyber) cookie worthy, that is.
As for Miss Ordinary, I'll see what I can do. I'm still kinda stuck, so- oh whoops, I don't think I should have told you that. _
| authordream4life 6/7/08 . chapter 12
Jeesh-take long enough? XD It was very good, and I'm happy you're writing again. Can't wait for more-don't you DARE try to make me!
| live.in.content 6/3/08 . chapter 12
nice chapter, update soon!
| fluffykitty 6/3/08 . chapter 12
Definitely awesome-possum chapter. I really enjoyed watching her plan basically going down the drain. Sounds like something(again) that would happen to me. I wonder who screamed. Well, who caught them sleeping next to each other. Marissa? Which reminds me, I like the way you mentioned that they basically talked all night, but I didn't. It seemed a little choppy and forced to me. But I can't think of a way to transition it well, so... I'll just mark it as one of those things that people just have trouble with. I've never seen it executed well in writing, that I can remember, so... I don't know. Good job with the chapter, despite it seeming unusually short. Whatever, I really liked it. Really I did.
| FictionRose 6/3/08 . chapter 12
AWH! I love it! I love Nathan, like ALOT. LOL. Yeah it was TOTALLY funny. Later they tried to ask us out and we were like, "Who are you." Looking all confused and stuff, it was so funny!
| cheekymonkey2772 6/3/08 . chapter 12
I really like this story...continue the good work...i love the story line,heheh
| I Murder on Impulse 6/2/08 . chapter 12
Haha she's cute!
| Guacamole 6/2/08 . chapter 12
oh wow she kissed him! hehe and who i wonder was screaming?...XD well i'll have to see next chapter! update again when you can!
| Izzey 6/2/08 . chapter 12
awesome story so far. i cant ait for the next chapter. you have a great style of writing and i really like it. please update really soon!