LOL, one sentence REALLY cracked me up for some odd reason:

"Gawd...what a sore loser..."

I don't know why but it really did. Anyway, very funny and interesting. I think I'll read on...

Orange Orchids

LOL! Still you did draw on someone's face before... HAHA... Pity that person... LOL!

CLEO GOT STUCK IN NATHAN'S ROOM WINDOW! -falls to the floor laughing- Embarrassing and Hilarious! AND SHE WAS IN HER POWERPUFF UNDERWEAR! WORST! When your friend got stuck in the window, was she wearing a powerpuff underwear? LOL! Really pity her... HAHA

Anyways... I liked the part where Cleo's dad came home... HAHA.. How ironical of him to say that, "Nothing can keep us apart..." LOL

Wow! I love this story! The first four chapters were great and I can't wait to see where you take the rest! I can't wait for more Nathan-hotness!

Update soon!

Cathy

I absolutely loved this chapter! The most hillarious was the scene when Cleo tried to climb in through the window. You said your friend did that, actually. Did anybody see her? If I was seen like that, I'd probably die of shame. But, that's just me.

Oh, Nathan is so evil. lol Can't wait till the next chapter, to see what he's up to now. I think he's my fav character.

Finally, something that made me laugh :) and I'm supposed to be doing my homework, you owe me one! Haha, I really liked your other story about the president's son so I thought I'd check this out too. Your writing style is definitely something I enjoy, light and humourous does the trick. I have to say that Cleo's name is pretty funny, I can only imagine having Orange as a last name. The fly on the wall POV made me crack up, that's ingenious, let me tell you. Poor thing died of syphilis! XD As for Nathan... I have to say that he sounded a little creepy in Chapter 2, when he promised to make Cleo fall in love with him. I think I know where's THAT's going. It must have been hilarious seeing your friend stuck in the window in her underwear! Was it PPG underwear too? XD I like what Nathan has over Cleo now. Who knows what he might do to her. Erica and Anita sound like rad friends :)

So yup, amusing story as usual! I'll be looking out for your next update, both for this and your other story - the title escapes my mind now. I shall go do my homework now, UPDATE SOON!

Yes! Ah ha ha... oh...

Is he going to be the love interest? -I'm almost hoping not but you haven't really introduced anymore guys-

I suppose she could turn gay... I'd almost prefer that just so she could laugh in Nathen's face... ha ha, it'd certainly be -interesting-

OMG!love the story, can't wait for the next update

I didn't like this chapter, I LOVED IT! It was so hilarious! I dropped off of my chairing, dying with laughter! You should have seen my mom's face. She looked like she was about to call the asylum. I think she's going to put that number on speed dial... But, yeah, this chapter was really cool _ I aspire to write my own story someday and I'll be asking you for some tips! Chao XD

SOO GOOD! Please write more soon, my dear author-person...that I'm a fan of!

I really like the undoubtedly unique (ALLITERATION!) plot line, and the characters just like...rock.

Wow, this is just...such a good story; you gotta write more soon dood!

-sas

Loved this chapter! You can join my hate/heart Nathatniel club! Ha ha! Update again soon! His egotistical hottness... yummy...!

-Rischel

hahaha. nathan sounds like such an ass, and especially those twins. I would've murdered nathan whether or not he was a family friend if he caught me still with bed hair...keep up the good work! yeah, and "woot woot!" is awesome!

YAY UPDATE! LOL... Thanks I love my name too.. i got it from a picture i drew out of boredom... LOL..

Anyways... Great chapter... Nathan would really have to try much much harder to get get Cleo to like him... LOL But i say... Drawing on someone's face with permanent marker is totally hilarious... XD ... Especially when it is someone you really hate... Just don't let them find out who you are... heheP...

UPDATE SOON! IM WAITING! again... ...

Bwha! Great story so far. I can't wait for the next update.

YEAH! more more. heh heh. u think i can compliment Ha! i am not the only crazy person on this planet. but urs is probably a much milder form of craziness. . . . one that makes you think people who can't compliment can. hee hee, im so proud, u've replied to me on ur author notes thingy! u r the first! hee hee. hyperactiveness is fun! oh, well please put up more of all your stories soon! Anita and Erica seem nice. Nathan just amuses me. getting his little brothers to draw on her face with permenant marker Ha! Some people are so immature (me being one of them) so yeah! bye. hm i want a pet purple sheep. hm with green spots on jits fur or fleece or cootony thing. hm . . . . am i the only one who worries about me?

you have a very nice style of writing. keep up the story! it's good!