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| Moondog Dozier 2006-12-14 ch 1,  | abuseThe comparison works well, as does the rhyme to keep the structure. I like how this isn't forced like many rhyming works. This really has some unique aspects to it. Well done. |
| Redeemed 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuseHeart-wrenching, but beautiful. You picked a good comparison. |
| JojoAnn 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very beautiful poem. |