O, getting a little incestual? xD

Anywho, I think I've read every single story you've published. I think you have about 1 female character in all. xD

Moving on.
It was good, but you really need someone to edit for you. There were multiple spelling mistakes and some sentences that weren't quite grammatically correct.
Now I'm human also, so I don't blame you, but you should probably get someone to look over it.
I would be happy to if you ever need someone to read over a story before you publish it.

My e-mail is
Anywho, keep up the good work!...Oh, and I'm curious with this story. Please write more!

wow...

i got this sort of shiver that I have, only when I enjoy something. I have to shake it out.

Wow...
again...

This was an excellent read and absolutely perfect.

I have nothing in the way of criticism, only complements.

and all I have left to say is...

wow...

Incredible! A marvelous twist on the incest cliche. I do recommend, though, that you print it out and go through it with a red pen, because there are numerous misspellings and such.

I was wondering when you're going to update.

Hi yeah this is a great chapter, but i was wondering when you would be updating that other story "Stars" that one's my favorite!. Please update soon!

Whoa...that was sexy! I know that you haven't recieved a lot of reviews for this story, but I'd really appreciate it if you continued with it. I can't say too much on the story now, but I can say that it promises to be something amazing (if updated and taken care of properly). Vampires are the coolest, if I do say so myself.

God that was enticing. The way you write always makes me interested to hear more about everyone, every character, everything.