I won't pretend to be the wisest person in the world and understand every meaning attached in between your words. But I do like this kind of poem, and when I say "this kind", I mean the kind of poem that mentions obvious, seemingly insignificant things that we somehow always miss. Like cheap notebook with a very nice pencil and so and so, if you get what I mean.

Not limited to poems only ^^ Stories alike.

I love your first stanza, by the way.

:O so romantic! that's lovely, and soo soo sweet. If this is based on your life, then I must say you're quite the romantic. Good job.