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JC Delacy
2008-07-17
ch 31,
abuseI loved this story!
But, is it finished?
If not...PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON!
kazekage13
2008-07-17
ch 31,
abuseEpilogue soon, hopefully?
Lady of Confusion
2008-07-14
ch 31,
abuseVERY COOL! I LOVED IT!
cue.dramatic.gasp.
2008-07-03
ch 31,
abuseI've been waiting forever for the epilogue. Please, oh please, just update soon. This is a fantastic story and I think the chemistry between Chris and Erin is AMAZING. :]
Jestry
2008-06-28
ch 31,
abuseM.
I guess it was an okay story.
I don't know. All that action seemed a little TOO dramatic. I mean, I don't know, it felt like my brain was spinning through everything, because the rest of the plot didn't really have that much actually, and all of a sudden everything just exploded.

It seems to lack closure... but then again, I don't know. Is there going to be an epilogue, because I see in the comments that you said there was, but the last time you updated was in... march.

Oh well. Anyway. Um. I liked your dialogue throughout the story. It made it seem natural, and as if the characters actually had a relationship. Haha. XD
Jestry
2008-06-27
ch 27,
abuseOh man.
I never suspected. :<
Nice twist seriously. I would have never guessed.
Jestry
2008-06-26
ch 18,
abuseI don't get it.

Why can't Chris just kidnap her and take her to that writer's Uni? -=-
Jestry
2008-06-26
ch 16,
abuse...
Honestly, was that really necessary? The break up with Luke?
Why couldn't she just have told him she wanted to move? Didn't he say that she would have let her go? Maybe she could have come with her?

... I'm not really convinced that he /is/ the one who's keeping her in the cycle.

Wait how come Letter Tag isn't on fictionpress anymore? I never got a chance to read it. D:
Liah
2008-06-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey, epilogue?!
MZ PEACHESZZ
2008-06-04
ch 31, anon.
abuseWhere...are...you...?

It has been almost 3 months!

It's just weird with you off the radar. I mean, everything's pretty much wrapped up in the story and I am not dying for an epilogue...but still...you've like fallen off earth!

Come back! Update us! Let us know you're alive! New story(ies)!?


tata!
selkiewings
2008-05-31
ch 31,
abuseThis is such a wonderful story. I can't wait for the epilogue.
SparklingStar25
2008-05-29
ch 31,
abuseThis is awesome!
love the story and the whole supernatural thing...
I never ever though it could be Jake..what a shocker!
Im glad Chloe is holding up fine..and David's there for her..;)
And another thing that really surprised me was Lenni and Seb appearing here...it felt so nice to read about them again...y'd take Letter Tag off?r u editing it?sorry if you've already mentioned this and i've missed it..
I really really liked this story!Great job!
and congrats at all the awards you got at skow!
tc


theres an epilogue left right?
cordqueen
2008-05-18
ch 31,
abuseI really liked this story and I'm excited to read the epilogue when it gets posted!
cheergurl12
2008-05-09
ch 31,
abuseOMGG! i just read tht whole story all
in like one day! tht was amazing!
i absolutley loved it! and it was so differnt
once i started reading i just could stop!!
:)
Pione
2008-05-06
ch 31,
abuseChris is just so cute! :D
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