Reviews for Sharp Edges and Shadows

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cheergurl12 2008-05-09 ch 31,	abuseOMGG! i just read tht whole story all in like one day! tht was amazing! i absolutley loved it! and it was so differnt once i started reading i just could stop!! :)
Pione 2008-05-06 ch 31,	abuseChris is just so cute! :D
P 2008-05-06 ch 24, anon.	abuseWow!! I like this chapter a lot. :)
artificial destiny 2008-05-04 ch 31,	abusei absolutely positively loved this. so much! i kinda wish they killed jack though. i mean, what if he manipulated the jailors to free him? what then? ah. i'll just pretend he died :D thanks so much for writing this!! -artificial destiny
xxglasskidxx 2008-04-18 ch 1,	abuseThis is such a cute story with a great plot. I loved it! I couldn't wait to get home and read it... haha I put of homework to read it too xD However, I do wish more attention had been paid to spelling. It can be very distracting, and ultimately takes away from the presentation and integrity of the work. Sometimes when there are many misspellings throughout the story or misuse of words, the reader gets the feel that maybe the author just doesn't care. I really hope though, and am pretty sure that this isn't the case with you, because it really seems like you put a lot of effort into writing this amazing story. Everything but the spelling was great though. Mainly what I noticed was that you should be more careful with your use of their there and they're, and to and too. If you got a beta reader, I'm sure the spelling would be much better. :) I really hope you aren't offended. I loved the story, the spelling just got to me sometimes. Also, I'll be checking daily for the epilogue so I hope it's posted soon! :)
Norel 2008-04-15 ch 1,	abuseDefinitely interesting. I'll read more later, but I just wanted to say that I liked the first chapter so far.
Eloiria 2008-04-09 ch 31,	abuse... you know, you should really turn this into a novel... staring at my laptop for hours make my eyes really sore.. but still, I LOVE IT and please, I beg you once more, PUBLISH THIS STORY AS FAST AS YOU CAN! I'm counting on you for that! I've read the first chap of latter tag and now I really miss it... After you've edited it, please put it on fictionpress again... PLEASE?
Singing for Absolution 2008-04-06 ch 31,	abusewell, that's nice. actually, I'm laughing as I write this. I had a stalker, ended up having to change my moblie number, move, and such. Pain in the arse. wait...I didn't have to move, cause I don't even have a flat. Now I'm stuck awake at night cause my boss likes to play the piano at 3 am trying to conjour ghosts. Bloody brilliant. Anyways (Sorry. I'm spiteful) I really liked this one. Liked your music choices too, even if they were creepy. Leah reminds me of my sister. She hit my brother over the head with a bottle of vodka. He was drunk off his head, but still. Phwoar. Cheers. We'll be looking for some more of your stuff soon, so maybe I'll have something to do at 3am. Don't know how his fiancee deals with it...
rawritsrchl 2008-04-05 ch 1,	abusei think this will be a fun story
violet blossom 2008-04-05 ch 31,	abuseWhat an awesome story.. I've just read this story and instantly love it.. I like Chris and Erin very much.. Their personalities are so different from Lenni and Seb.. Not that I'm saying I don't like Lenni and Seb... But I'm wondering about Erin's family.. From her story, it looks like her family getting along quite well.. I naturally assume that if she was attacked like that, her family would somehow know about it and make and appeareance in the story.. At least make a phone call afterwards or something..
Kayla Christine 2008-04-04 ch 1,	abuseWow this is quite the intriguing story... I just spent my entire study hall reading it rather than doing my Parenting report, which is really what I should be doing. Or maybe even my English Research Paper. But, I am forever a procrastinator and since neither are due until next week, I chose you :) and I have to say I love this story, it's so mysterious and that guy just makes me wonder... I want to keep reading it so bad, but I can't because the class is almost over :( I'll be reading more though, that's a definate. I'd love to give you some CC but I can't because, less a few typos (I think you put 'is' instead of 'it' somewhere), this story flows perfectly and sucks you in immediately. You have a very original style of writing, and you totally own it. Keep it up! Kayla Christine
sunflowersing 2008-03-29 ch 1,	abuseThis story is going to be awesome. I can already tell! :-D sunflowersing
Chiclets 2008-03-28 ch 20,	abuseOkay. I don't remember why you took down Letter Tag...but I don't think you should have... And I do wonder if you kept a copy (you'd better have... :P) and if I could have it? Because I love that story...pretty pretty please. :) As for the date thing...honestly, the mm/dd/yy thing actually bugs me, and I always write mine dd/mm/yy. It makes more sense that way.
RandomActsOfInsanity 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abuseHey! I've read all of your stories and just wanted to say that I find you to be an incredible writer. True, nobody's perfect, and I'm sure you realize the little typos that slip into your stories here and there, but other than that, your stories are really intriguing, brilliant plots. I couldn't stop laughing when I read Letter Tag, and Faces is one of the best one shots I have ever read! I couldn't believe it actually happened to you! Funny ;D For Sharp Edges, I love Chris' split personalities, they always seem to crack me up every time ;D And for him to think that Erin might actually go back to her ex? God! I had a silly grin on my face! ;) Erin's a good character too. Nice twist of events! I never even suspected Jack =O Lol (: I honestly can't find anything wrong with the story. It's that good! One of the chapters you ended it with a cliffhanger? I was so frustrated! And I mean that as a compliment ;) I'm looking forward to the epilogue ;) I hope you don't take that as pressure! All in all, great work. Absolutely Love it! ;D
violet-eyez 2008-03-25 ch 31,	abuseso what is she going to go to uni in the epilogue?

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