"It seems like forever is imprinted upon my lips"

thats a gorgeous line., & the whole poem is just so...subtle (for want of a better word) & flwoing...lovely work. thanks for the review. Bex xx

I cant even describe how this made me feel, all I can say is that I loved it. "Between lightning crashes/And/Pale blue angel eyes" that line just hits me. It really made the whole thing for me.

oh.

amazingly written.

i love it all, especially the last line.

it reminds me of fallen angels.