I loved this... it was short and simple. I liked the open ending.

i love you, kelsey. this poem is the ** . makes me want to plaster it all over myspace and facebook LOL.

like dang.
dang girl, dang.

favz

You gotta love this poem! It punches you in the gut when you reach the last line - it's such a great quip! 'or our guilt!' With some poems, I like them for their imagery, but with your poetry, I like it for it's one-liners. They're always great!

Another thing I liked about this poem was the idea that all three things are vying to be the loudest - her screaming, his laughter, or their collective guilt. It gives me the mind's eye image of three things - the guilt being an entity too! - screaming away at each other, trying to top one another. It's great!

So it's favourited!
- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon (link in my profile)

short but very good.

i thought it sounded kinky. hahaha. but yeah, i like how u left it open to interpretation for the audience. really gives u a nice thought.

I love the powerful simplicity of your poem. It makes it relatable to anyone, because the reader can be left to interpret what's going on. This vauge writing is my favorite kind, keep up the good work!

It's only four lines... but it has the impact of twenty.
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... I really like it!
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R. Louise

Hey!

That's really good. Short, but concise.

Luv ya,
Tashi :)

yeah.
close enough to perfect.
very good.

I love how your poetry is simple and too the point ( in a way ) and still captures the whole picture in just a few lines. You have talent.

nice structure

nice... i think your pen name goes along quite well with the poem, not that that means anything...

I love how simple yet powerful this is; the pauses after the last 3 lines make the poem more dramatic and effective. Nice work. :]

I'm sure every other review will say something to the effect of how much they liked this because there was so much said in such little words... well, I would consider myself one of them, then. Anyway, I love how simple it is and there isn't anything too wordy about it and it's applicable to many different situations. Good job.