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Reviews For: Lost in my Life

Travis C. Eckert
2007-02-16
ch 1,
abuseHe wouldn't do that! Would he? A lot of thought and emotion in this.
angel953
2006-12-14
ch 1,
abuseGreat poem.

I miss the old Caitlin though. The one who was always smiling, and luaghing. The one who never even thought about . You're really scaring me. I must blame Todd for the most part of that. You weren't like this before him. He changed you, and I'll never forget that or forgive that.
Ajna
2006-12-09
ch 1,
abuseI like the last two lines, it really wraps up the poem well.
randompoetry
2006-12-09
ch 1,
abuseI loved the conflicting emotions in this poem! Especially this line "I don’t want to live./I don’t want to go." Great job.
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