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| Travis C. Eckert 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseHe wouldn't do that! Would he? A lot of thought and emotion in this. |
| angel953 2006-12-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. I miss the old Caitlin though. The one who was always smiling, and luaghing. The one who never even thought about . You're really scaring me. I must blame Todd for the most part of that. You weren't like this before him. He changed you, and I'll never forget that or forgive that. |
| Ajna 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abuseI like the last two lines, it really wraps up the poem well. |
| randompoetry 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abuseI loved the conflicting emotions in this poem! Especially this line "I don’t want to live./I don’t want to go." Great job. |