 Cesalie Chase 2006-12-09 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this first chapter! You have a very light and humorous style - very fun to read. And I like how you've presented the stepmother and stepsisters not as evil, but as simply being... unfortunate, in a way. Your Cinderella seems to be a much happier girl - now I'm especially curious to see your take on the ball itself!
“You know, duckie! A ball! With music and dancing and that sort of thing. My goodness! Have you lived in the basement all your life?” That part cracked me up! Great sense of humor. Bravate.
Peace! --Jen |