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| Yeeger 2007-01-15 ch 1,  | abuseI love the simplicity, yet deeper meaning. And the rhyme scheme was superb. ~Yeeger |
| Sunbleached 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abusewow that was really pretty.Good job |
| Sting Ferdinand 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abuseI love it! I love the rhyme, the rhythm, and what I think is the deeper meaning. Love it! LOVE IT! |
| Cesalie Chase 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abuseSo short, yet so amazingly profound! I love the style - the parallel structure of the two stanzas is a nice touch. And that's to say nothing of your beautiful choice of words. Such an awesome way to think about something so simple as color and light... --Jen |
| Frore 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abuseAww, very cute. I like the observation of it. |
| Sakka-Fenikkusu 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abuseI repeat - catchy. |