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Reviews For: Ten Year Reunion
TesubCalle 2006-12-17 . chapter 1
I think you're off to a great start. Already Lila is an easy character to like and understand.
Your introduction to the characters was casual and certainly gives us no indication of the bumpy times you have planned for them at the reunion.
I especially loved Lila's 'Cross my heart and hope to die'. I do so like when these seemingly random (and common) phrases show up in thriller/mysteries. Double-meanings are such fun!
Hope to read more of this. You show much promise.
Brandon Byron 2006-12-10 . chapter 1
Interesting beginning. You set your stall out with an innocent opening - and, looking at the genre, one can only assume that this will be shattered untimely. Please, continue.
Mclily 2006-12-10 . chapter 1
Hey there!
When I read the summary I just couldn't help but smile a bit. My name is Lila, too. Well Lilla actually, but that's the closest thing it can get. n_n Seems like a good story, has potential. Keep up the good work and

Take care
McLily
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