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| emmaliefje 2006-12-17 ch 1,   | *shudder* Creepy. But as realistic/real as it gets... Awesome job, wonderfully written, just a few punctuation mistakes... |
| Intrepid23 2006-12-14 ch 1, | A very brilliant piece of writing- strong imagery, good plot, end-of-the-story irony... Pieces like this are hard to find. |