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| Morrighu 2007-07-17 ch 1,   | Great job. ^^ But try to not use the '...' so much, it takes away from the poem. Only use it when it's needed. Otherwise leaving it out works just the same, without taking anything away. |
| Cay 2007-02-03 ch 1, | Hey Trey. This is Cay, wow. Very nice. I must say. Descriptive very much so. I will be reading more of your work and once I get my email working I will make my own account.[Or tommorw you can help me when your here] Talk to you soon. Keep it up. -Cay Psalm139 |
| Monster In Your Head 2007-01-17 ch 1, | wow that was really good. The form is very good. Really brings out the motions and feelings of Sex. I loved it |
| Ben Wuest 2006-12-30 ch 1, | Dear god, you're the best. B. |
| anon 2006-12-12 ch 1, | i love you |
| Jessie-and-James 2006-12-10 ch 1, | We love you, Trey, just for writing this (and yes, we read it together), and then we did what it said. *just kidding* ;) |