I loved that. It was surreal but amazing true. It was a beutiful piece. I loved the simple yet truely effective rhyming scheme.

Gave me goose bumps. Great poem. I love the idea. Keep up the good wrok.

It's sad, it's beautiful. Good job!

It is so sad to me that people would waste their lives, thinking it is too much to bear, and kill themselves. I mean, I understand why, but, I think it is terrible. Great job.

I like.