Your style has this very...I don't know how to explain it, but it makes the reader's heart feel heavy like the narrator's. The pace is very steady and thoughtful, and it really makes the reader think through every phrase and contemplate its weight. Nicely done.

It’s either very late
Or very early,
Depending on whether you’ve been asleep.
-god, just amazing. it connects with everyone, everywhere.


you are just amazing to me
everytime

It's a great poem =)

I like your writing style... mine are usually separated too, but my Word isn't work at the moment, and It never comes out right with the WordPad -_- lol

Great work

Stay well *


nK

wow, this is quite good, and it's not really a "love poem" persay, but it's obviously about love, or just your feelings for the other person. would you call it love yet? or would it be better described as your thoughts on the effect that the other person has on you. I like this alot.

very sweet verse.