 Catcher in the Rye 2007-02-04 . chapter 1I've always loved your "lovey dovey" poems! |
 RosesAndKittens 2007-01-29 . chapter 1Everything rymed, it seemed like a great poem. |
 Jarlaxe 2006-12-26 . chapter 1Excellent very nice, it speaks to the reader very nicely...though you might want to fix...
How I feel
Now one else can feel this way
But me
I think you meant 'Know' instead of 'now'
Good job though!
P.S. Ninety five poems...how do you do it. haha keep it up. |
 angel953 2006-12-26 . chapter 1Great job!! =D |
 Black and White Dreams 2006-12-22 . chapter 1That's sweet. Very beautiful. Makes a person wonder who this is about, if anyone. Beautifully done.
*~Black and White Dreams~* |
 Shadows in the Fire 2006-12-12 . chapter 1Oh, that is so pretty! You have a way with words. Also, on your bio you said you needed help with publishing? There is anouther website called Fanstory (dot-com) that gets you at least three comments per poem or story and helps on the road to publishing! You are really good--There is a 45$ fee but it is so worth it.
The best of luck to you!
-Amber |