Aww. The last line just made it for me. I was like uh-huh yeah, okay, cool idea and all, but it doesn't seem like it really means anything to her. But then it did. So cool. xD

Nice flow. Not really a clear meaning, but it could be, I don't know, a metaphor for something perhaps. -shrug-

Rowan.

Wonderful work. I don't like the actual poem as I do what is behind the words, between the lines. Awesome job. Keep writing, k.