good symbolic representation, simple but enjoyable, and nicely predictable.

kool.
smiles :)

10/10 I really like your poem it is a good comparison. (Maybe you could rate some of my stuff, I saw your post on that forum.

Cute little poem with a message that rings true. I think the last line has too many syllables and the formatting is unnecessary, though.

i think in your title you mean "if" love is a candle.

;)

nice look at the old metaphor.