 Midnight In Eden 2007-02-11 . chapter 1Oh now this has flow, this has rhythm, this doesn't even need punctuation. Color me freaking impressed.
But I will complain over the inconsistent use of "and" vs. "&". Use one or the either consistently please? Thank you.
The bond they share now
Cannot be surpassed
While that does contribute to your awesome flow it feels slightly trite.
Otherwise, very much enjoying this piece.
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