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Jessiy 2009-08-20 . chapter 6
Another fabulishious chappy dreamerdoll! I can't wait for a new updates (I have it on story alert hehe). My birthdays on a Sunday (A week this Sunday so the 30TH Aug) I hope you update then tehe!Much love and admiration Jessiy x
Jessiy 2009-08-20 . chapter 5
I've said it before and I'll say it again...ace! Well done. Great characters, how I wish they knew the other loved them! Hehe, *hugs* Jessiy x
Jessiy 2009-08-20 . chapter 4
For this review: Admit I'm cool...haha oj.

Wow! I love your characterisation and it is just overall well written and great. You are cool, like me *grins*.

Well done and a pat on the back Jessiy x
Jessiy 2009-08-20 . chapter 3
Awesome! The last bit had me laughing, I love jokes...but was it?? Hehe. It'a mad how both (I think) like eachother but think the other doesn't good plan. Love it :) 10/10 Jessiy x
Jessiy 2009-08-20 . chapter 2
Wow! Immensley great and so sweet. These characters seem so real I love them! Well done and 10/1. Jessiy x
Jessiy 2009-08-20 . chapter 1
I find their relationship that is there interesting, how you didn't show it start is interesting. I like it, it's unique. A little crazy how they are like this, even if Dam has a girlfriend but I'm sure that will be covered. Great writing style to. 10/10

Jessiy x
i-see-faeries 2009-05-08 . chapter 6
Damn, this is getting good! I love it! Can't wait to see more.
jessica loves a7x 2009-03-18 . chapter 6
OMG i love this
i so wished you would continue this its amazing
zomgnessa 2009-03-08 . chapter 6
This needs to be updated NOW!

seriously, i want to see what happens
izziexxx 2008-12-29 . chapter 6
I just found this story (I very much enjoyed it) but sad to see it hasn't been updated in over a year, I always manage to do this, find stories that are discontinued, then the stories i find that aren't discontinued I don't like
I hope very much that this is updated some time soon.
bluerose24 2008-03-13 . chapter 6
I really hope that you update this sometime. It is good so far and I want to read more and see what happens.
Ashayu 2007-12-26 . chapter 6
Wow! This is the first story I've ever read here on fictionpress and it's very good!!
You must keep writing this! It's awesome!
erasmuss 2007-11-23 . chapter 6
Blah- Why has this stopped?
:(
Well, I like it a lot. Your charcaters are extremly entertaining, and so far this is a pleasant break from the morbid things I normally read. Actually made me laughat some points.
Anyway. Tis- was good.
I would love tosee it finished one day...
happy lullaby 2007-10-01 . chapter 6
This is so good! It's really cute. Please update soon 'cause I can't wait to see what happens!
Limited Edition 2007-09-27 . chapter 1
I'm not fond of the way Tracy is portraid. It's stereotypical. Omaygawdx0rz liek that fugly biatch is just there screaming OMAYGAWD!

It gets rather interesting when Cale is crying hahaha. But the reason wasn't so very interesting.

The language flows nicely and it's easy to enter the story.

The way they say "I love you" is...I don't go AW! But the way the nuzzle is cutesy!

Well cute haha
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