OOhh..that was really cool. :)

Seriously, I love these new ideas. Graffiti art is freakin' awesome...if it looks cool. And when it's not for gangs. But even then it looks cool. Darn it! :P

And if you ever plan on continuing this...well, I think it could turn into an awesome story. I love the idea, and I loved the intro.

Keep writing!

;)becky

I really liked it and im very interested in reading more. The idea is different and thats good. I'll definately be looking out for this story!