sigh. you put my writing to shame. when are you going to continue these one chapter thingys?
author person/shaggywolf

this sounds realy intresting... what happens next?

dude, that's totally wicked awesome. It's a cliff hanger >.< can't wait to see what she saw

This story has so much truth in it, it's hard to believe that you're putting it on a site named Fictionpress. Do continue! And good luck on finals! (So I won't expect an update until, say...Friday? XD)