It's like seeing my own thoughts! This is EXACTLY how I feel towards a friend of mine (who refuses to leave her room and talk to me when I call or come over) *sobbing* sad situation. I got the feeling that this poem could be about a single mom, a big brother/sister or a friend. Either one, it's Great!!
I loved it XD >.

I like the poem/song. I can relate to it too. Also, thanks for reviewing Bound. Anyway. I like this and I hope you continue to write poems/songs. :)

I'm not sure I like the repetition of the rhyme "room/doom", but overall it's fine. It's a little sad and angry. The rhyming is a bit strange, and almost forced (again, room/doom). I like the point, but something about the presentation troubles me.