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| RuchiraMandal 2008-01-22 ch 1,  | abuseLovely. This is perhaps what I would have liked to say to my love, but would have never been able to do it so beautifully. |
| Neaera 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseAw! I love this! It's adorable and I love your choice of words :o) Keep it up! |
| Complications 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abusethat's really sweet, and it works well as a song (P.S. I'm not one to judge that, but I do think it does). |
| R. Sharmayne 2006-12-18 ch 1, | abuseStrong and nurturing |
| Honor Bound 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseanother good one. the dream a litle dream part was nice, and the repetition made it seem almost a chant, lovely. good flow. peace |
| Victor Joseph 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abusenice. i like the structure of this one. the repitition gives a really good feel to it. |
| The World is Not Enough 2006-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good! |
| Harper K 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abuseoo, very nice! I especially like the last stanza. This is intense but at the same time has a kind of calmness about it. I like it! And thanks very much for reviewing my poem! It's much appreciated ^_^ ~Harper K |
| Guess Who? 2006-12-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is sweet. You must really love your boyfriend or whatever he is. I hope everything goes fine for the both of you. I hope to read more of your work. |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-12-11 ch 1, | abuseNOTE: This is a blunder of what I was thinking when I had free time to write. I just made the saying of, "Dream a Little Dream for me," into something of my own. Anyway, I hope that you will read this and enjoy it. I would love it if you reviewed but you don't have to. Thank so much for even reading it. Love, Tiffany Pradeep |