Lovely. This is perhaps what I would have liked to say to my love, but would have never been able to do it so beautifully.

Aw! I love this! It's adorable and I love your choice of words :o) Keep it up!

that's really sweet, and it works well as a song (P.S. I'm not one to judge that, but I do think it does).

Strong and nurturing

another good one. the dream a litle dream part was nice, and the repetition made it seem almost a chant, lovely. good flow. peace

nice. i like the structure of this one. the repitition gives a really good feel to it.

Very good!

oo, very nice! I especially like the last stanza. This is intense but at the same time has a kind of calmness about it. I like it! And thanks very much for reviewing my poem! It's much appreciated ^_^

~Harper K

This is sweet. You must really love your boyfriend or whatever he is. I hope everything goes fine for the both of you. I hope to read more of your work.

NOTE:

This is a blunder of what I was thinking when I had free time to write. I just made the saying of, "Dream a Little Dream for me," into something of my own. Anyway, I hope that you will read this and enjoy it. I would love it if you reviewed but you don't have to. Thank so much for even reading it.

Love,

Tiffany Pradeep