 Moondog Dozier 2007-11-09 . chapter 1This has an interesting feel and texture to it. Very etheral and sincere at the same time. I like the existential honesty of this. Hope all is well with you. MD:77. |
 Jenlinkitty 2007-10-17 . chapter 1Wow, o.o very emotional. Very good. |
 TylerB 2007-02-28 . chapter 1It's a sad song, if not slightly cliched. I was expecting a surprise ending perhaps but had to settle for a full circle one (which isn't bad at all) The flow of the peice itself carries it. Good job! |
 Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-12-12 . chapter 1I would say that 'how can one be a ghost if write with such emotion,' but maybe a ghost feels more. You wrote something inspiring once again.
EB |