Hello there, I'm just popping in to say:
I find your story to be progressing quite well. It is well written, and I like the way your story flows. I look forward to your next update!
Lyn-san

really good story ^^ keep it up, i can't wait till the next installment ^0^

Oh no! What's going on with her parents!? Can't wait to find out and can't wait to see what happens at the party, so get writing... er.. after you're done reading (blushes) LOL

I can't wait until the party!! Oh... I wonder how they will meet? Can't wait! Can't wait! Can't wait!! Please update soon!

-Rischel

You've got my interest peaked.
Keep it up!!

good intro
write more please
you need some more character developement
~marika

Oh! A party! Can't wait to see what happens there! Please update soon!

-Rischel

oh! Something tells me something's gonna happen at this party... can't wait!

Wow! I like this! Keep writing, Girl!

And the plot thickens... Actually the plot's just starting! Can't wait for more!! Please update soon. Sounds really awesome! I love all you stuff. They're really good!

-Rischel

Cool! A second chapter!! Can't wait for more updates! Loved it. The average life thing is what I have going. So boring; everyday it's the same thing over and over. Wish something interesting would happen to me. Update soon!!

-Rischel

I love the prologue. It sounds very interesting. I can't wait to read more. Vampire stories are some of my favorite stories to read! They're very dark and mysterious. They give me the shivers! Can't wait! Please update soon!!

-Rischel

I'm interested. I don't have much to say other then that and I'll be keeping my eye on this. So, until the next update.

interesting
keep it up

YAY!! New story!! I love all of you mess and I know that this one will be just as good if not better.