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| Twilight Starr 2008-03-19 ch 2,  | abuseGreat addition. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat job on description. It's sad. My favorite part is "beauty of the blade". Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| tesa131313 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abuseVery descripitive, I like that. I also like how you describe cutting in an aesthetically pleasing way (not saying that I cut but it's a nice way to write about it) It's a nice repetition going on too. |
| kathleen30263 2006-12-13 ch 2, | abuseIs Teddy Bear around? |
| kathleen30263 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abuseHate the topic. Good writing. Sad subject. |
| Ryumaru shogunate 2006-12-11 ch 2, | abuseExcellent! I love it! Keep it up! |
| Ryumaru shogunate 2006-12-11 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful reference to the wonder that is blood! And of course a blood stained blade! The second chapter is a revision? Coll I'll check it out! |
| Honor Bound 2006-12-11 ch 1, | abuseodd piece. i hope you dont actually mutilate yourself. but, i liked the line of shimmer in the light, great red and silver. very nice. oh, btw, you should change your word fropm perticular to particular. peace |