|Reviews for Little Dot|
| Twilight Starr 3/19/08 . chapter 2
Great addition. Nice work.
| Twilight Starr 3/19/08 . chapter 1
Great job on description. It's sad. My favorite part is "beauty of the blade". Nice work.
| tesa131313 12/15/06 . chapter 1
Very descripitive, I like that. I also like how you describe cutting in an aesthetically pleasing way (not saying that I cut but it's a nice way to write about it) It's a nice repetition going on too.
| kathleen30263 12/13/06 . chapter 2
Is Teddy Bear around?
| kathleen30263 12/12/06 . chapter 1
Hate the topic. Good writing. Sad subject.
| Ryumaru shogunate 12/11/06 . chapter 2
Excellent! I love it! Keep it up!
| Ryumaru shogunate 12/11/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful reference to the wonder that is blood! And of course a blood stained blade! The second chapter is a revision? Coll I'll check it out!
| Honor Bound 12/11/06 . chapter 1
odd piece. i hope you dont actually mutilate yourself. but, i liked the line of shimmer in the light, great red and silver. very nice. oh, btw, you should change your word fropm perticular to particular. peace