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Twilight Starr
2008-03-19
ch 2,
abuseGreat addition. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr
2008-03-19
ch 1,
abuseGreat job on description. It's sad. My favorite part is "beauty of the blade". Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
tesa131313
2006-12-15
ch 1,
abuseVery descripitive, I like that. I also like how you describe cutting in an aesthetically pleasing way (not saying that I cut but it's a nice way to write about it) It's a nice repetition going on too.
kathleen30263
2006-12-13
ch 2,
abuseIs Teddy Bear around?
kathleen30263
2006-12-12
ch 1,
abuseHate the topic. Good writing. Sad subject.
Ryumaru shogunate
2006-12-11
ch 2,
abuseExcellent! I love it! Keep it up!
Ryumaru shogunate
2006-12-11
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful reference to the wonder that is blood! And of course a blood stained blade! The second chapter is a revision? Coll I'll check it out!
Honor Bound
2006-12-11
ch 1,
abuseodd piece. i hope you dont actually mutilate yourself. but, i liked the line of shimmer in the light, great red and silver. very nice. oh, btw, you should change your word fropm perticular to particular. peace
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