hidden desires, eh?

i totally feel the same!...*blushes*

minor errors, though:

-For.. to listen 'to' my pr'yer? ('to' instead of 'for' since the request is directed to and not taken from)

i like the dramatic situation situated in the poem..

Perhaps, in psychoanalysis, one could fish out more than one emotion that the writer intended..:)

nice...

:)