Just simply "Wowable!"

Very nice. I like the choice of words. A little short, but that's perfectly okay.

~Best of luck

Your choice of words is very good. My only critique about this is your rhyme scheme. It goes: AABCCDD. The three B's are a little distracting because there's no other spot in the poem that uses a series of 3. Other than that, this isn't bad. I agree with your comment about leaving notes in poems, it feels weird and it doesn't look right. Good job.

~Cirien Phoenix

P.S. Thanks for the review on "Carmilla." I'm completely flattered to be put into a C2. Thanks so very very very very much! I'm so happy to see that you loved it!

loved the imagery and flow of this, felt like water. but, im not sure if what its talking about really.

Well done!

Nice imagery. It has good flow and rhyme. All in all, it was well written and one of the best poems I've read in weeks. Good job.

Beautiful imagery. Beautiful rhyming and descriptions. I could visualise the night. and you have an interesting username. Any chance of meeting you up on

I like this very much. Beautifully written. I wonder if I can ever feel and accept in this way?

Peace, Doc

Pretty, pretty imagery... I like the almost underlying darkness of it, if that makes any sense. You did a good job piecing this together.

NOTE:

I wrote this when I was having a bad day, which everyone has in there life. I guess it is me wanting to much to get out the troubles that I am having right now making me want an end. I hope it could mean something more to you. I do thank you for reading!

(side note) - I don't like putting notes on my poems anymore because I think it looks horrible. That is just me.


Bless You,

Tiffany Pradeep