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| Guess Who? 2006-12-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust simply "Wowable!" |
| Chaotix Halo 2006-12-18 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. I like the choice of words. A little short, but that's perfectly okay. ~Best of luck |
| Cirien Phoenix 2006-12-18 ch 1, | abuseYour choice of words is very good. My only critique about this is your rhyme scheme. It goes: AABCCDD. The three B's are a little distracting because there's no other spot in the poem that uses a series of 3. Other than that, this isn't bad. I agree with your comment about leaving notes in poems, it feels weird and it doesn't look right. Good job. ~Cirien Phoenix P.S. Thanks for the review on "Carmilla." I'm completely flattered to be put into a C2. Thanks so very very very very much! I'm so happy to see that you loved it! |
| Honor Bound 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseloved the imagery and flow of this, felt like water. but, im not sure if what its talking about really. |
| Guess Who? 2006-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell done! |
| Kier Haliana 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseNice imagery. It has good flow and rhyme. All in all, it was well written and one of the best poems I've read in weeks. Good job. |
| MirandaToock 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful imagery. Beautiful rhyming and descriptions. I could visualise the night. and you have an interesting username. Any chance of meeting you up on |
| Doc Blood 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abuseI like this very much. Beautifully written. I wonder if I can ever feel and accept in this way? Peace, Doc |
| Frore 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abusePretty, pretty imagery... I like the almost underlying darkness of it, if that makes any sense. You did a good job piecing this together. |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abuseNOTE: I wrote this when I was having a bad day, which everyone has in there life. I guess it is me wanting to much to get out the troubles that I am having right now making me want an end. I hope it could mean something more to you. I do thank you for reading! (side note) - I don't like putting notes on my poems anymore because I think it looks horrible. That is just me. Bless You, Tiffany Pradeep |